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You shiver again. The cold air makes your breath visible, likely from a mile away. Darn false weather reports, you mumble to yourself as you hug your thin jacket closer to your numb body.

"Hey, (y/n)!" you hear a voice call and you look up to see your blonde friend looking warm as ever, with his huge coat on and obviously his glasses. You do your best to move your face muscles into a small smile as you say,

"You're so lucky to have that huge coat all the time, the weatherman said it would only be mildly chilly!"

He laughed, replying, "But it is only mildly chilly for up here, eh?" You groan and plop down onto the half-frozen bench, him sitting next to you. You sat there for a moment, and he looked at you as if he were deciding on doing something, and then he opened his coat and wrapped it around you as well as him, so that he was hugging you close to his own warm body. You blush and snuggle closer to him, wrapping your own arms around his chest.

He buries his face into your hair, mumbling, "I've wanted to do that for a long time, you know."

Looking up at his face, you smile at him and say, "I have too, you know." He lets go of you with one arm to cup your cheek in his hand and pull your face closer to his own. Your faces get closer and closer, as if you were about to kiss, when the bus comes. You both stand, and, hand in hand, climb onto the bus.

He sits next to you, mumbling into your ear as he grabs your hand, "We can continue that kiss later, where it's not so public." You nod, smiling. You couldn't wait for that kiss.
It's short but fluffy! :iconitssofluffyplz: I appreciate commentary and feedback!
[link] Part 2~ (warning: lemon!)
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:iconwhybot221:
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
Aww
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:iconhomestucklov35:
homestucklov35 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I did the same thing as you gravityfallsgoddess
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Gravityfallsgoddess Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
-gets really perverted thoughts at the last line- -reads description- oh my.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconkushamisaru: :iconsaysplz: :iconitssofluffyplz:

*Reads description:

Part 2? And it's a lemon? O.o
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Lol someone wanted it. Anything for teh peeps!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's a good attitude to have!

I imagine there aren't a lot of canada lemons out there...
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist
You'd be surprised.
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:iconkushamisaru:
kushamisaru Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
O.o
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist
lol
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Dorothyy98 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
How CUTE!!!!!~~~ :iconfeelingfreeplz: I totally love it!!! :heart: :heart:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Well thank you~
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ArianaCeleste Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
I loved how confident you made him :D
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank youu~
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pikachuart Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm.. now for this one...

I liked how you used mumbling a lot for Matthew... since that's what he does best ^^'' I think you captured his shyness perfectly.. and the jacket cuddling is just oh so cute! :heart:

now you made me feel a bit lonesome (i want a bf for the cold season)... but lol! It's sooo cute! Good job, imouto-chan!!

The two stories you wrote are just too cute!! :iconhontoplz:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you chu-chan!:heart: It means a lot coming from youu! :iconsupertighthugplz:
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coconutcrutch Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
:iconkawaiilazeplz: So cute...
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Heehee thank youu~ A lot of my fanfics are uber fluffy, you should check them out!!
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AW, I WANT TO DO THAT SOMEDAY!!! :aww:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
:iconyusplz: as do I, dear, as do I...
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondummywooplz:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
hehe I'm posting a part 2 in a little with a lemon~
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see. :)
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
hehe
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohoho, If only it was later. :iconsexycanadaplz:
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Maybe I'll add a part 2 ;)
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YEY! :iconfrancewantsplz:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
I'll get right to that now, my friend's been bugging me to get away from the fluffy stuff, that's not her thing. She loves lemons!
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me toooo. OuO
:LEMONSLEMONSLEMONSLEMONSYAY:
:iconpervplz:
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Hahahaha! I'm with you on that. The only problems are :iconovariesplz: and my darn filters! I'll word it well so that it isn't blocked. XD
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YUSSIR. XD
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
hehe
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Its snowing right now in ALASKA. -_- God, I hate it. But, It does look pretty. anywho, this is a good story ^^
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow, yesterday it was non-stop rain in the East coast, where I live. It was a hurricane. Luckily I didn't get a huge part of it.
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Keep safe!
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RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Thanks, you too!
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awesomegirlO Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
So CUUUUTE!
I clicked on this so fast because I'm freezing right now.
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist
Heehe! I was originally going to make the title it's feezing, but I decided this would be cuter~
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, just fluff. I loves it~
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist
Heehee as fluffy as Kumajiro!
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:icontssweets:
TSsweets Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmhmm~
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roailia Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so fluflly!!! >.<
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Hehe that's my goal!
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roailia Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconamericaw00tplz:
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:iconrainbowuni-potato:
RainbowUni-Potato Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist
heehee
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